The ScribblePreach Awards 10.21.16

Kindle Deal of the Week: The NIV Application Commentary Series – This quality commentary series is on sale for $4.99 a piece, typically each is about $25 digital! Included on sale: Galatians, 1 & 2 Timothy (and Titus), 1 Corinthians, 2 Corinthians, Colossians and Philemon, Philippians, Ephesians1 & 2 Thessalonians, and Doug Moo on Romans!

Apologetics: On the Key to Reaching Unbelievers – Devin Maddox wisely takes us beyond the argument over ‘degrees of contextualization’ to the very heart of the matter: whether or not we have compassion.

Preaching: Writing Sermons in Community – I love the main point of this article, but I would add a pretty radical qualifier, which is that if we make our sermon evaluation group a church staff, our sermons are going to become increasingly “insider speak”. At least half the feedback needs to be from non-Christians.

Theology: The Missing Elements of Modern Worship – Tim Challies nails it, here. I think this says a lot about what church services are really typically about…us.

Spiritual Life: John Owen on Delighting in Worship – Speaking of worship, here’s a positive injunction from the man himself: John Owen.

Fun: Jimi Hendrix Plays “Sgt Pepper” Just Three Days After Release – This is a really interesting story, with some video footage and speculation to boot.

A Glimpse of Truth: The Town that Isn’t – This episode of radiolab hones in on the divisions separating our country, by looking at a small town that decided to…not exist. A fascinating and harrowing look at conflict without the gospel.

Writing: Why the Best Writing is ‘Steeped in Knowledge’ – This interview with Terry McDonell—editor, journalist and media entrepreneur for Esquire, Sports Illustrated, Rolling Stone and Outside – is steeped in knowledge indeed.

Christians and Culture: Quotes from the Centered and Sent Conference – Some wonderful and timely quips from Tim Keller and others. 

Leadership and Productivity: John D. Rockefeller’s Keys to Success – Believe it or not, it has nothing to do with making power plays. Just the opposite.

Mercy and Justice: Lecrae is Done Explaining Himself – Brothers and sisters, we can do better than this. Please don’t wrap up the true, sad story Lecrae is telling into your own.

New! Marriage and Family: Happy Daddy, Happy Home – I love the honesty and wisdom in the campus minister interviewed, here. Great stuff.

Scribblepreach Awards 10.15.16

Kindle Deal of the Week: Bob Dylan: All The Songs – The Story Behind Every Track. This is a $50 book for $3.99! I’m purchasing it for a few reasons: a. The magnificent discount. b. My creative writing tutor in Oxford thought Dylan was the best contemporary American writer we’ve produced c. Dylan’s songs make for perennially better reading than listening.

Apologetics: From My Journal:  It’s interesting that so many folks (according to recent Lifeway research) want to affirm that God accepts all forms of worship. It’s especially interesting because the three major religions of the world – Christianity, Judaism and Islam – reject that notion on the basis of the Exodus narrative, where Yahweh presents himself as a superior God, and the worship of the Egyptians as abhorrent. So saying “all religions are equal” is really just a sly way of saying, “I reject the major claim of the three major world religions”. It would be better, or at least more truthful, to say, “I reject all religion.” Or, “I’m a Hindu.”

Preaching: A Checklist for More Persuasive Presentations – This doesn’t all apply to preaching, but preachers can still take some gold from this article.

Theology: N.T. Wright on Jesus’ Revolution – I liked Michael Horton’s review of N.T. Wright’s book, but I liked this lengthy interview with N.T. Wright about it even better.

Spiritual Life: Martyn Lloyd Jones on Ministry Idolatry – I’ve heard these late in life lines from MLJ, but, they’re always striking.

Fun: Luke Cage Gets a Family Matters Makeover – I grew up on Family Matters…This redone intro to the new B.A. Luke Cage series on Netflix cracked me up.

A Glimpse of Truth: The Binge Breaker – This story in the Atlantic is about tech pioneer Tristan Harris, who is convinced technology companies are taking advantage of our psychology to promote their products. This is nothing new, but I believe in 50 years we’ll look at social media the way we look at tobacco companies today. Lots of truth in this one.

Writing: 7 Bad Writing Habits You Learned in School – As it turns out, writing for teachers is not the same as writing for readers.

Christians and Culture: Restoring Civility in the Public Square – Tim Keller is about to speak at a big convention on this, and his word to Christians is well-timed.

Leadership and Productivity: Leaders Shape Culture Through Behavior – Forget the tactics. People watch what you do.

Mercy and Justice: 5 Dangers of the Patriarchy Movement – Sometimes called the “complementarian” movement, but it’s really a perversion of it. I resonated with this article for so many reasons.

New! Marriage and Family: Parents, Let your ‘No’ be ‘No’. I always find good stuff in this category, and never have a place for it. Well, here it is.

Scribblepreach Awards 10.08.16

A Personal Update: Today I’m in West Virginia, taking an interview with a committee of the New River Presbytery of the PCA. We’re talking about starting a new campus ministry at West Virginia University, a school of 30,000-some students, and the #3 party school in the nation (with lots of drug/meth-specifically addictions to boot). We’ve sensed God’s call to campus ministry for some time, and would covet your prayers for discernment on our part and the presbytery’s committee.

Kindle Deal of the Week: Bonhoeffer: Pastor, Prophet, Martyr, Spy – This wildly popular treatment by Eric Metaxas is a steal for $2.99.

Apologetics: Why God’s Sexual Ethic is Good for the World – You can’t get three better people talking on this issue.

Preaching: What Makes a Great Teacher? I think Dr. Murray’s point about teachers applies to preachers as well, and I’ve been chewing on it all week.

Theology: Evangelicals, Heresy, and Scripture Alone – This article is so welcome. “Sola scriptura” does not mean “Solo scriptura”…but most evangelicals seem to think it does, according to the latest polls.

Spiritual Life: The Instagram Bible: “Beware the Instagram Bible, my daughters – those filtered frames festooned with feathered verses, adorned in all manner of loops and tails, bedecked with blossoms, saturated with sunsets, culled and curated just for you.”

Fun: Bad Lip Reading of the Debate – So “Bad Lip Reading” put up a version of the presidential debate that is better than the original. Not hard to do, but still.

A Glimpse of Truth: A Rabbi’s Enduring Sermon on Your Last Five Minutes – This is a powerful story. It doesn’t ultimately capture what I think a Christian’s thoughts should be in their last five minutes, but it was still very stirring and convicting to me (thus, a “glimpse” of truth…)

Writing: Stop Trying to Sound Smart When You’re Writing – Yes. Yes, please do.

Christians and Culture: 4 Cultural Trends Leading to the Decline of Religious Liberty – It’s striking that we actually founded most of these trends!

Leadership and Productivity: 10 Tips from 10 Years – Stephen McAlpine with 10 reflections from his 10 years in ministry.

New! Mercy and Justice: Diversity and Music This article by Leon Brown is a helpful hand for churches wanting to seek diversity…don’t assume all black cultures love gospel music!

The ScribblePreach Awards 10.01.16

Kindle Deal of the Week: Surprised By HopeN.T. Wright’s fantastic recovery of the idea of the resurrection from the impoverished ideas we have of heaven. A must read, for $1.99.

Apologetics: For the Bible Tells Me So – A critique of Andy Stanley’s recent claim that Christians shouldn’t believe the gospel because “the bible tells me so.” Here is an important rejoinder. I think what all of the responses have been missing is the fact that Andy, here, is simply conceding the enlightenment idea that our own intellects are the best source of knowledge about the universe. That’s incredibly naive and egotistical, and I don’t think it will ultimately lead many people to Christianity (as per the last few hundred years, for example).

Preaching: Marks of Gospel Preaching – Dave Harvey suggests some ways to measure the fruitfulness of preaching without metrics.

Theology: The Three Persons of the Trinity in Tradition – Kevin DeYoung wisely weighs in on this hot topic.

Spiritual Life: The Singing Man – What an incredibly touching video, and story to boot.

Fun: Artificial Intelligence Tries to Write a Beatle’s Song: I love the Beatles, and I love the science of art, so naturally this is the most entertained I’ve been all week.

A Glimpse of Truth: Infinite Jest: On the hypocrisy of addicts: “They’ll p*** and moan your ear off if somebody else f*** with the rules, but they don’t deep down see themselves subject to them, the same rules. And they’re constitutionally unable to learn from anybody else’s experience: if some jaywalking B.U. student does get splattered on Comm. or some House resident does get his car towed at 0005, your other student’s or addict’s response to this will be to ponder just what imponderable difference makes it possible for that other guy to get splattered or towed and not him, the ponderer. They never doubt the difference— they just ponder it. It’s like a kind of idolatry of uniqueness. It’s unvarying and kind of spirit-killing for a Staffer to watch, that the only way your addict ever learns anything is the hard way. It has to happen to them to like upset the idolatry.” – David Foster Wallace

Writing: How to Be a Writer – 10 beautiful and penetrating points.

Books and Lit: Who Gets to Write What? Kaitlynn Greenidge has a powerful NY Times piece against the pc claim that people can’t write about cultures other than their own.

Christians and Culture: Life in a Secular Age – The Art of Manliness podcast features James K.A. Smith this week, and it covers everything from the haunting of secularism to the X-files. 

Leadership and Productivity: How to Send E-mails – Some good and courteous advice.

New! Mercy and Justice: From My Journal: I’ve been thinking about the mercy of evangelism lately. I think it’s conspicuous that the only people told to evangelize in the New Testament are pastors. In my opinion, that’s likely not a mistake. Evangelism goes hand in hand with the gift of teaching. That’s not to say lay-people shouldn’t evangelize, but only that it seems the locus of attention for most people will be about pre-evangelism: asking good questions, sharing their personal testimony, inviting friends to church events, having non-Christian neighbors over to dinner, giving away good books, etc. I wonder if more people would engage in the mission if pastors encouraged pre-evangelism, rather than burdening people to have gifts they simply don’t possess (or by over-simplifying the gospel into an easy-to-present-format that, though doable for everyone, actually waters the thing down).

Scribblepreach Awards 09.24.16

Kindle Deal of the Week: The Pilgrim’s Regress – Lewis’s earliest post-Christian nonfiction work, for $1.99

Apologetics: 20 Quotes from Tim Keller’s Prequel to The Reason for God – You really can’t go wrong, here.

Preaching: Three Tips for Teaching OT Narratives – Three concise, excellent and wise tips on preaching narrative that I’ve been chewing on all week.

Theology: The Crucified King – In the most compelling section of Treat’s work, he argues against the idea that Jesus is enthroned *after* his crucifixion, as we typically think (resurrection, then ascension, which is Jesus’ inauguration). Instead, he claims the crucifixion was Jesus’ enthronement, which has crazy cool implications for Christian ethics:

“In his article ‘Crucifixion as Parodic Exaltation,’ Marcus explores Roman perceptions of crucifixion, arguing that the ‘lifting up’ on the cross was a parody of the victim’s own self-exaltation. In other words, crucifixion was a mock enthronement. Marcus claims that by employing such irony, Mark is mocking the mockery and thereby revealing that the one crucified as a pretender king truly is king. Marcus’s summary is compelling: ‘Ensconced on the royal seat of the cross, the crucified person was a king of fools; but the supreme irony for Mark is that in the present instance this laughingstock of a ‘king’ is indeed being installed as the monarch of the universe. Having been clothed, crowned, and hailed as a king in the previous section, Jesus is now royally enthroned— on a cross’.” – Jeremy R. Treat

Spiritual Life: The Bible Project Reading Plan – I want to commend to you something I’ve been using with our youth group this year: the Bible Project Reading Plan. I love it, because it takes you through one book at a time, and also holds your hand by providing short, well-crafted videos before you start reading. Excellent resource. Highly recommended.

Fun: Between Two Ferns – Okay, so this interview from Zach Galifianakus, frustratingly, is a homage to Hillary Clinton in the guise of a mockery of her. Not that I want her to be mocked…but I get increasingly irritated by folks who think they’re doing something bold and courageous by following the mainline stance. Anyway – all that aside. This is absolutely hilarious.

A Glimpse of Truth: The ‘Inevitable’ Evolution of Science – The Atlantic with a killer critique of the idea that science is a good arbiter of truth. Actually, modern scientific views are market-driven, not truth-driven…surprise!

Writing: Don’t Make Stuff for Money – “Every single day, I get emails from aspiring writers asking my advice about how to become a writer, and here is the only advice I can give: Don’t make stuff because you want to make money — it will never make you enough money. And don’t make stuff because you want to get famous — because you will never feel famous enough. Make gifts for people — and work hard on making those gifts in the hope that those people will notice and like the gifts.” – Josh Green

Books and Lit: Not Entertained Enough – Karen Swallow Prior gently takes some prominent theologians and writers to task on their low view of entertainment. So good. 

Christians and Culture: Openings in Our Fractured Republic – This article takes WORK, son. But the little I comprehended was very helpful. Very. James K.A. Smith rocks it.

Leadership and Productivity: The Difference Between Good Leaders and Great Ones – This is interesting, though I do wonder what the word ‘forceful’ actually means.

New! Mercy and Justice: Are You Going to Hurt Me? – This is a category that always seems to want to make its way into my weekly awards. So here it is, kicking off with a beautiful piece of writing from Tim Challies.

So, Sometimes I Mess Up…Big Time.

Hey Everyone,

I recently received a response from one my readers asking me to reconsider my little “microaggression” on the article about microaggression. After re-reading the article, I think he’s absolutely right. The reason is that MOST (but not all) of the examples in the article are examples of truly racist remarks, and I don’t at all want to minimize how evil and damaging these things are, not only on campuses, but anywhere in society.

What I don’t appreciate about the article is the way it lumps gender issues into racism, which I think is offensive to minorities. Being surprised that someone is a lesbian “because you’re so feminine” is a result of culture’s own mass confusion about the nature of gender. And saying “you guys”is a microaggression is a result of our culture’s impoverished view of language and oversensitivity by those who currently hold the cultural cards.

However, I do not find ANY of the racist remarks in the article endorsable or acceptable in any way whatsoever.

So, if I’ve promoted racism, or offended my readers who are minorities and have experienced the oppression of racist remarks, please forgive me. No excuses.


Scribblepreach Awards 09.10.16

Kindle Deal of the Week: The True Secret of Writing – From the author of “Writing Down the Bones,” for $3.99

Apologetics: From my Journal: It’s really not coherent to claim tolerance if you’ve ever been indignant about…anything. Because at root, ethics are theological implications. We see this in Moses’ encounter with Pharaoh, but we also see it in a relatively contemporary crisis: American slavery. Many under the yolk of slavery categorized their oppression as ‘bad theology’, such as Solomon Northup (12 Years a Slave): ““I could not comprehend the justice of that law, or that religion, which upholds or recognizes the principle of slavery;”.

To say that all religions are equal is to look Northup in the eye and say, “You’re a bigot.” Maybe tolerance is a privilege for those of us who’ve never experienced oppression. Maybe it’s less of an opinion, and more of a luxury. Because tolerance can’t do anything for oppression but smile and pat it on the head. Is that really what you want for this world?

Preaching: What’s Preaching For? Peter Leithart with some interesting application of Medieval theology to the task of preaching. 

Theology: The Crucified King: “If one defines the kingdom as a utopian world without mentioning God, they miss the whole point of the kingdom, which redefines the world in terms of God’s kingship. R.T. France put it well: ‘The kingdom of God’ is not making a statement about a ‘thing’ called ‘the kingdom’, but about God, that he is king.” – Jeremy R. Treat

Spiritual Life – Spiritual Disciplines and the Sinkhole Syndrome – This one hit me hard.

Fun: Makeup Artists Becomes Ron Swanson – I’m a Parks and Rec fan….not sure whether to be impressed by this or creeped out.

A Glimpse of Truth: Pondering Miracles, Medical and Religious – An atheistic doctor talks about what he learned in his encounters with the vatican, and ultimately concluding that his science is its own sort of religion. 

Writing: 20 Words Smart People Misuse – So…I have a writer’s confession: I am a king of malopropism. These types of articles are for me.

Books and Lit: No, The Internet Has Not Killed the Book – For those of us in the ‘normal’ bracket:“They want books to be available wherever they are,” Mr. Rainie said. “They’ll read an ebook on a crowded bus, curl up with a printed book when they feel like that, and go to bed with a tablet.”

Christians and Culture: Understanding Generation Snowflake – When Carl Trueman speaks of Generation Snowflake, he’s talking about this: Campuses Train Students to Be Insulted (oops, changed the title a bit).

Leadership and Productivity: Pastoral Visitation – I’m going to post two articles, and let you duke it out: 15 Reasons Your Pastors Should Not Visit Much, and the response:  Pastoral Visitation a “Sign of Sickness”? I wonder if this debate actually has more to do with church size. I can see Dr. Murray’s point in a congregation under 150, but I can see Dr. Rainer’s views being necessary as the congregation grows beyond that point.


The Road to Redemption: C.S. Lewis and J.R.R. Tolkien on Moral Transformation

This essay is a collection of thoughts on a theme in the writings of Lewis and Tolkien which I was tipped off to some years ago. I was clearing out some items from our landlord’s garage, packing my bags for Massachusetts to begin my first year of seminary.

I was listening to a series of lectures entitled, “Preaching to a Postmodern World” – a joint project of Ed Clowney’s and Tim Keller’s which has long since been retracted from the publisher’s website.

These were released prior to the expansion of the Lord of the Rings into the world of film, and Keller was espousing the beauty of the series. He was hoping, he said, that its popularity post-film would make his illustrations more poignant with his New York audience. When asked how many times he had read the books, he replied: “I’ve stopped counting. Over and over again.”

When probed as to why, he said, simply: “Nothing does a better job of showing evil as evil, and good as good.”

That, quite simply, is the impetus for the theme I’ve chosen to explore this summer in my reading of Lewis and Tolkien. More specifically, I’ve chosen to hone in on a nuance on that theme which I believe is, perhaps, the chief and driving force in their work. These men did not happen upon the theme of virtue and vice.

Their efforts and commentary on it seem more intentional than that, almost conspiratorial.

Underlying their work there seems to be a continual undercurrent, a singular thread that holds all of it together. That thread, I believe, is a question: “How can we become good?” and, “Where do we go wrong?”

This question is interesting to me because, of everything Lewis and Tolkien wrote, it seems most pressing to our current times. Debates are raging within Christendom itself over the nature of virtue and vice. Even the current tussles over Christians and culture (Benedict Option? Church as Kingdom? Republican? Democrat? Libertarian? Homeschool vs. Public School?) are, in some measure, based on moral theory, as I think we will see below.

These are the questions of our time.

It’s difficult for me not to think Lewis and Tolkien are prophetic in this regard. There is the kind of prophet who sees mystically into the future, and the kind that deduces it by brute fact. Perhaps Lewis and Tolkien were a bit of both, for it seems in their writings that in some measure, they anticipated the future (or, more likely, that they saw America’s future in a slightly more progressive England), and carefully laid a pathway out of the moral stranglehold in which we’re now entangled.

They are voices, crying in the wilderness: “This is the way – walk in it!”

In the majority of this essay, I will focus on three prominent themes at play in the works of Lewis and Tolkien on virtue and vice. Certainly Lewis and Tolkien have much to say in this regard, and as is so often, many of the debates raging today amount to amorphous or conflicting definitions of terms.

We cannot decide how to be virtuous if we cannot define virtue. Neither can we recognize vice unless we see it clearly. On these points alone, Lewis and Tolkien – I believe – would cast a hearty ‘Amen.’

In the final component of this essay, I’ll be dealing briefly with ways in which Tolkien and Lewis give us a path forward – three tools, if you will, from the path of vice to the future of virtue.

These are not comprehensive. Lewis and Tolkien have much more to say on moral transformation (for instance, I don’t have room to comment on their laborious efforts to dismantle modern notions of education, and the sort of role that plays in moral transformation). But I’ve selected those themes I believe are the spokes to the wheels of Lewis and Tolkien’s further thoughts on the matter. In that way, I hope the final portion of the essay to be a kind of compass moving forward into their world, rather than a map, detailing its every nuance.

Part I: The Nature of Vice and Virtue

The Stakes of Virtue and Vice: What Kind of World do You Want?

Merry, Frodo, Pippin and Sam are ambling up the lane to their beloved home, The Shire. They have dismantled the power of Saruman, cast the ring of the Great Eye into Mount Doom, and witnessed the crowning of the rightful king. One expects, for all intents and purposes, that their return home will be one of joy. At last, they may enjoy sweet Shire tobacco, sit by the table to hear old Lotho’s tales, and write poetry under the shade of old, green trees.

Yet upon the hobbits’ return, they find a scene quite different. For one, the physical landscape has changed: the bright, green trees of the Shire have been felled[1]. But the moral and psychological landscape has gone through its own transformation.

The joys of the Shire have been stripped from the locals: no beer, no weed, no eating beyond rations, no Inns, no “Shire Talk”.[2] The doings of those in charge are cloaked in secrecy, name-changing, and paranoia. The Shire itself has become, in a sense, a shadow of Mordor.
In a poignant moment, Sam makes comment on the horror of it all: “This is worse than Mordor! Much worse in a way. It comes home to you, as they say; because it is home, and you remember it before it was all ruined.[3]”

What was once depicted as lush, quaint, beautiful and full of joy has now been defaced.

Tolkien, in rare form, is careful to make clear the connection: all that we’ve seen in Mordor has come home. Even those in authority are explicitly linked to the look of orcs.[4]

The cost of vice, for Tolkien, is beauty itself. All that was worth living for in the Shire is now gone.


Jill and Eustace stand on a moral precipice. They have freed Prince Rilian from his enchanted Silver Chair, and now they come face to face with the evil queen Jadus. As she speaks, the world of Narnia feels increasingly like a figment of their imagination, a specter of the past which has no real weight to bear on the Reality of the Queen’s cave.

Now they must choose: will they cling to the world of Aslan, or will they succumb to the seductive spell of the Queen?

As the Queen weaves her spell, however, the morose Puddleglum feels increasingly ill at ease. In a stroke of heroism, he walks over to the fire where the Witch’s spell brews, and places his foot stolidly into the flame: “what remained smelled very largely of burnt Marsh-wiggle, which is not at all an enchanting smell.[5]” Then, in another stroke, he deals the Witch her moral deathblow:

Suppose we have only dreamed, or made up, all those things – trees and grass and sun and moon and stars and Aslan himself. Suppose we have. Then all I can say is that, in that case, the made-up things seem a good deal more important than the real ones.
Suppose this black pit of a kingdom of yours is the only world. Well, it strikes me as a pretty poor one. And that’s a funny thing, when you come to think of it. We’re just babies making up a game, if you’re right. But four babies playing a game can make a playworld which licks your real world hollow. That’s why I’m going to stand by the play-world. I’m on Aslan’s side even if there isn’t any Aslan to lead it. I’m going to live as like a Narnian as I can even if there isn’t any Narnia.[6]

The ultimate appeal to Narnia for Puddleglum – and perhaps Lewis itself – is the very fact of the world itself. It is a better world than the one supposed by science, progress, enlightenment and rationalism. It is a far better world, even, than the Relativists will offer. To “live like a Narnian”, as Puddleglum asserts, is to live a life of virtue.

The engine of that virtue is a love of beauty. It is a moral vision for a world that is better than the one we have: a world full of wonder, intimacy, and joy. The Witch’s logic may have been airtight. In the end, however, it is beauty itself which defogs the minds of those under her spell.

In both of these passages, we see coming home to roost a theme which is prevalent in the writings of Lewis and Tolkien. They are both, in a sense, moving past logical argument for the existence of God, and the goodness of virtue. Rather, they are attempting to show its beauty.

They are asking us, in a phrase: “What sort of world would you like to live in?”

This, for Lewis and Tolkien, is in a very real sense the starting point for moral discussion. The question of right and wrong is not suited to ivory towers; it is rooted rightly in common experience. By keeping before us the beauty of a virtuous world, Tolkien and Lewis provide the moorings of ethical behavior: a vision of a better, more ethical society.

But the question is not merely societal for Lewis and Tolkien. There is, also, an individual component to ethics. So to the question: “What sort of world do you wish to live in?” could also be added: “What sort of life do you wish to live?”


Edmund is stuck up, from the beginning. He sees himself as intellectually superior to his young sister Lucy, and will do anything he can to prove it.[7] The seed of evil is already planted within him. When he encounters the White Witch, his desire to be honored and his love of praise are the hooks she uses to reel him in.[8] In the end, Edmund’s evil desires lead him to a moral crisis. The evil he does is far beyond what even he recognizes at the time.

Yet it is telling to note where Edmund’s moral transformation begins. It begins with Edmund’s coming to terms with the world he’s created for himself. He is made a slave, and driven to despair at the Queen’s lying promises.[9] It is when the fresh, cold snow hits his face and sticks to his skin (much like Puddleglum’s foot in the fire), that he “wakes up” to the lies he’d been telling himself. He sees first hand the sort of world the Witch would create.

Upon seeing animals of Narnia gathering for a springtime party, she pronounces: “What is the meaning of all this gluttony, this waste, this self indulgence? Where did you get all these things?”[10] After turning one of her victims to stone, Edmund in a very real way must ask the very Pauline question: “But what fruit were you getting at that time from the things of which you are now ashamed? For the end of those things is death.[11]”


Boromir, despite his depiction in the Peter Jackson trilogy, is presented to us in Tolkien’s work as a valiant man of noble blood.[12] And yet, his desire for glory and the pride of his people above all[13] lead him to act shamefully toward Frodo.

Like Edmund, evil presents Boromir with a glorious vision of personal power: “a mighty king, benevolent and wise”[14]. It is this vision which leads Boromir to attempt to take Frodo’s ring by force. When Frodo escapes, however, Boromir finds himself listless and sorrowful., ashamed at what he’s done.[15] He feels, in the end, that he has failed the Fellowship, and failed his people.[16]

Yet it is here where Tolkien draws the same point as Lewis: through Boromir’s failure, he has woken up to his own self-deceit. He has seen the destruction his vices have created, and he repents at the last, ushering some of Aragorn’s most beautiful words: “You have conquered. Few have gained such a victory. Be at peace!”[17]

In the end, Boromir’s moral transformation is complete. His self-destruction led him to see plainly the kind of world he was creating for himself, and, in the end, to complete the journey which few – as Aragorn notes – have ever completed: the journey toward repentance and restoration.

In the end, for both Lewis’ and Tolkien’s main characters, the choice is between, as Milton once wrote, reigning in hell or serving in heaven. This, it seems, is the question these men are provoking us to ask ourselves: Do you really want to live in the world vice creates for you – for us? Or do you aspire to something more?

They are laying down the stakes, urging us past our self-centered lenses, trying to compel us to see ourselves as part of the intricate web of the world. Will we choose the world of destruction, power, black and white, tastelessness, forlorn, ugly, and pragmatic? Or will we see the fruit of our evil labors, and choose instead a world filled with pleasure, beauty, song, dance, merriment, and joy? Will we choose to pursue that world which, as Psyche says, is “the place where all the beauty came from…my country, the place where I ought to have been born[18]”? Or will we make the world in our own image, where we are king, and we reign in ugliness from our self-appointed thrones? For in the end: “All get what they want…they do not always like it.[19]”

The Power of Virtue and Vice: Which Way Are You Going?

This offer of a new world, a different society, a life filled with beauty, pleasure, company and joy compels a different sort of question: Is it possible? In answer to this, both Tolkien and Lewis answer a resounding yes, though not in quite the same fashion. Tolkien is much more qualified and cautious; Lewis much more radical.

This no doubt stems from the nature of their own conversion experiences. Nevertheless, both of them are assured of one thing: moral transformation is not only possible – it is happening.

Mark, at first, seems like any other normal citizen. He is trying to make his way in the academic world, and is struggling for a post. Indeed, I think it his normalcy we are supposed to “notice”. He is a bland character, not a raging villain. This is just the point. There is nothing extravagant about those who’ve gone wrong.

Mark has found himself in a web of bureaucratic evils. He is, at first, merely seeking a higher post at his college (something to which Lewis could certainly relate!). He does so by taking up with Lord Feverstone, Busby and Curry. They seem to him to be “insiders”, to have access to the type of thing he wants.

Mark confidently asserts that he knows which side of the issues he’s on[20]. Yet as he continues into the Inner Rings, he finds the pull toward “getting in” is enough to assuage his moral instincts.[21] Turn by turn, the agenda he’s working under is unveiled: power mongering, progress loving humanity-hating. Yet with each step inward, Mark finds it ever more difficult to turn back. It begins with his writing a little, slightly deceptive article, “no bigger than a man’s hand”[22].

As time goes on, he becomes increasingly compelled to further deception, all drawn by “that intimate laughter between fellow professionals, which of all earthly powers is strongest to make men do very bad things before they are yet, individually, very bad men.[23]” The phrase, “not yet” is very telling for Lewis. The implication is quite profound: there is a sense in which small vices lead to larger ones.

Indeed, once begun, the path downward is nearly inevitable.


Gollum was not always so named. He was Smeagol, once – a short, plump, greedy little squab of a hobbit. But one day, something catches his eye: a bright, shining ring at the bottom of a river. It is this singular vision which drives him, shortly, to madness. He murders his friend, and steals away to a nearby cave. There, sitting in the glum and darkness, Smeagol soon becomes Gollum – the hideously strong, thin, bony, slimy, writhing and wrath-filled creature obsessed at every moment with his Precious.

What once promised Gollum freedom, and power, has now become master over him. He is able to be coerced by those who wield it[24]. He is seduced by it at the Forbidden Pool[25]. Gandalf says of him that the ring was “eating up his mind” until, at last, “the torment had become almost unbearable.[26]”

Indeed, Gollum, in the end, has all the characteristics of what we today term an “addict”.[27]

Though his quest began perhaps innocently enough, the murder of Deagol and the subsequent coverups degenerated Gollum’s character to the point of what seems, at times, no return. “Gollum” has taken over the person of “Smeagol”, even going so far as to continuously argue him into submission.[28]

Though Gandalf still holds out hope for him, the hope is but little.[29] For in the end, as Gandalf notes: “It was not Gollum, Frodo, but the ring that decided things.[30]” Gollum’s moral transformation is nearly complete – he is no longer the hobbit he once was. He has become, quite literally, a moral monster.

Tolkien and Lewis see moral transformation as a constant, not a potential. We are steadily growing closer to heroism or villainy, virtue or vice, freedom or captivity. Lewis will comment later that this transformation is the essence of eternity:

It is a serious thing to live in a society of possible gods and goddesses, to remember that the dullest and most uninteresting person you talk to may one day be a creature which, if you saw it now, you would be strongly tempted to worship, or else a horror and a corruption such as you now meet, if at all, only in a nightmare.[31]

We are all experiencing moral transformation.

Sin, according to Lewis and Tolkien, is like a cancer, and it is not benign. It grows. Each bad deed leads to the next; each moral decision has implications for who we become. Evil leads to further evil. Good leads to further good.

The Subtlety of Virtue and Vice: Things are Not Always What They Seem

Hobbits, of course, are not always what they seem. It is perhaps one of the reasons Gandalf loves the study of them, for they are always “full of surprises.[32]”

The most ordinary characters we encounter are often the most extraordinary. Farmer Maggot may be a crotchety old overprotective farmer, but by the end of the trilogy, he is portrayed as a hero.[33]

Though physically they are small, hobbits are described, time and again, as being “stout” of heart.[34] Frodo, for example, though frail, resists with incredible vigor the poisonous effects of the ring of power.[35] In a way, Bilbo’s mithril armor works as a kind of metaphor for being a Hobbit – there is more to them than meets the eye.[36]

We see the same irony at work in the character of Aragorn. At first, he looks haggardly, even dangerous.[37] Even he admits to the Hobbits that his looks are against him.[38] Yet Bilbo’s song of him gives away his secret: “All that is gold does not glitter, Not all those who wander are lost.[39]” As the story goes on, we see glimmers of Aragorn’s true character – he is a powerful, regal king, full of majesty and virtue.[40]

It is often, for Tolkien, the common, plain things which carry the most virtue. Though the Elves are filled with beauty, the items they create are simple in appearance. The rope of Lothlorien, for example, “looked slender [but] it proved strong enough to bear many men.[41]” Though the Elven boats are light as a feather, they are able to carry many men.[42] The drink of Glorfindel is plain, clear, and has no taste, “but strength and virtue seemed to flow into all their limbs as they drank it.”[43]

The common look of virtue is a prevalent theme in Tolkien, summarized well by the counsel of Elrond: “You will meet many foes, some open, and some disguised; and you may find friends upon your way when you least look for it.[44]”

This counsel is much needed for Frodo, who must not only see virtue through plane garb; he must also see through the “kind”, “friendly” and “smiling” face of Boromir later.[45] For it is not until Frodo resists that he sees Boromir for what he is: “His fair and pleasant face was hideously changed; a raging fire was in his eyes.”[46]

The very same pattern is at play later in the Two Towers, when the broken fellowship encounters Saruman. Tolkien purposefully portrays Saruman as sweet, musical, wise, and beautiful in comparison with the crudeness of Gandalf and Theoden[47] Tolkien makes a point, several times, of noting the similarity – on the surface – of Gandalf and Saruman, since Gandalf is “Saruman as he should have been.[48]” Unlike the way he is portrayed in the films,[49] Saruman is portrayed as living up to every good expectation – at least originally – of his reputation.[50] In fact, Saruman is able to portray himself in any fashion suitable to his purposes, and Gandalf warns his friends of this device since they are not wise enough to resist this deception.[51]

Virtue, for Tolkien, is often hidden in plane – even humble – garb. But vice has its own disguises; it often comes to us as beautiful and pleasant, until we resist its devices.


Toward the end of the final book in the Narnia series, a rumor has set afoot among the people of the land: Aslan has returned. Yet from the very first page, we see that this is the work of charlatans. Shift, an ape, is merely interested in using Aslan as a tool for personal gain.[52] Though upon close inspection the donkey Puzzle looks ludicrous, his lion costume is sufficient, from a distance, to fool and deceive most of the Narnians.[53]

Though Puzzle is a bit of a victim in all this, he himself is deceived by being told to think on “how much good we could do.[54]” This deception proves a challenge to even the most faithful members of Narnia. Common theological catchphrases are used to justify the false Aslan’s actions, particularly: “He is not a tame lion”. Taken the wrong way, even Jewel the Unicorn flirts with false belief.[55]

Lewis, here, is commenting on a theme prevalent in his writing: evil is often cloaked in the guise of goodness.

We see this as well in the villains he selects in the other stories. His arch-villains are characteristically queens, beautiful in speech and appearance. Queen Jadis is a case in point. She is beautiful, like the White Witch,[56] and her beauty has an enchantment over prince Rilian.[57] Her voice is sweet and musical, but leads Jill, Puddleglum and Eustace to the path of death and destruction.[58] Yet her chief desire is to be obeyed; to have power over others.[59] She makes an appeal to wisdom, a sort of appeal to beauty in itself, as opposed to ignorance and foolish talk concerning Narnia.[60] Yet her only desire is to see others suffer in the same way she herself suffers.[61]

The theme of hidden virtue is more subtle in the Narnia series, but is nevertheless present.

Narnia’s heroes, after all, are children – something even more striking when one sees them at battle in the films![62] When they first arrive in Narnia, often times they are laughed at or mocked by those whom they are sent to help. Upon first meeting them, Trumpkin the dwarf proclaims: “I suppose I’d better go back to King Caspian and tell him no help has come.[63]” This, obviously, serves Lewis’s purpose in writing for children. But the very fact that Lewis does write for children is telling also: virtue may be found, for Lewis, in the unlikeliest of places.

We see this exemplified in a comic way through Puddleglum. Puddleglum is a real sourpuss throughout his adventure in the Silver Chair, always seeing the downside of things and casting a pall on his circumstances, even when trying to be optimistic. Yet it is he – not Rilian, or Jill, or Eustace – who in the end sees through the Witch’s guise and snuffs out her evil spell. It is he who gives one of the greatest speeches in the Narniad: “I’m going to live as like a Narnian as I can even if there isn’t any Narnia![64]”

For Lewis, evil is a seductive force, enticing us in by the hook of our egos and the force of its beauty and subtlety. It appeals to our love for wisdom, and uses any enchantment it may to do so.

But virtue may also be subtle. Unlike Tolkien, for Lewis, virtue is not always subtle – it often comes brashly bounding in, rather like a lion. Virtue is bold and shining. But often times, it is carried through by the unlikeliest of peoples – Shasta, Jill, Eustace, the Pevensies, Puddleglum.

These are those who are often able to see past the masks of deception, for they have little ego on which to place evil’s appeal.

Part 2: The Journey to Goodness

This final portion of the essay will observe three ways both Tolkien and Lewis give us tools on the path toward virtue. Two of these have quite large divergences, and one is fairly homogenous. It’s important to note, however, that it’s really impossible to deduce real ‘prescriptions’ from works of fiction, so these are guesses, at best, and may not be real contradictions at all. However, I still believe it will be fruitful to see the way the author’s natural philosophies take root in their fiction, and how they appear to be at odds, and in agreement, on the path to virtue.

The Story of Virtue and Vice: The King’s Return vs. Progress

When Faramir describes his people’s descent into corruption, he describes it as a “lulling” process. Men were not made to do evil – they were made to believe no good was to be done. Playing upon their love of glory, they are eventually convinced that no war is at hand, and they ought to spend their time decorating their ancestors.[65]

A nearly identical description is applied to the men of Rohan.[66] It is for this reason that Gandalf is despised by places infected by evil: he is telling a narrative which conflicts with men’s desire for comfort and glory. He is attempting to draw people into a story bigger than themselves, and so is called a “meddler” and a bringer of bad tidings.[67]

For Tolkien, this seems to be a key in drawing men into virtue: they must be drawn into the larger narrative.

For Theoden, this takes the intervention of Gandalf himself. The spell cast over him must break, opening his eyes to the truth of the world around him. In fact, much of the introductory conversation between Aragorn and the Riders of Rohan prepares us for this.

When the Riders ask Aragorn whether we walk “on the green earth” or “in legend”, he responds: “A man may do both…For not we but those who come after will make the legends of our time. The green earth, say you? That is a mighty matter of legend, though you tread it under the light of day!”[68].

Tolkien is pointing us most explicitly to one of his grand themes in moral transformation: we must recognize that we, too, are living both on the green earth and in a legend ourselves.

We are living in a “true myth”.

This is why Tolkien’s most exemplary character and protagonist,[69] Samwise Gamgee, monologues at length about he and Frodo’s role in a grander narrative. Samwise wonders aloud whether they are not living out a kind of tale, and is taken in by the thought.[70]

Yet this is where Tolkien and Lewis greatly diverge. For it is key in Tolkien that Samwise does not believe he will play any great part in the tale. Rather, he laughs at the thought when Frodo presents it.[71] This is placed in opposition to Tolkien’s villains, especially Saruman.

Saruman wishes to use the power of the palantir to play a heroic effort in the narrative at work. Though he understands the narrative, he wishes to be a great hero in the tale – a desire which Tolkien sees as in itself corrupt.

The same is true in the fall of Boromir. Both men, seeing the narrative but desiring to derive glory from it, fall in the end.

On the contrary, not only Samwise but also Aragorn, Gandalf and Faramir feel that their role in the story is likely small and fruitless. Faramir does not see himself as a great hero, so is able to flee the temptation of the ring.[72] The noble Beregond has as much to say in his discourse with Pippin: “This is a great war long-planned, and we are but one piece in it, whatever pride may say.[73]”

Nothing could more clearly state Tolkien’s point on the intersection of narrative and virtue. The narrative must be recognized, but it must never be co-opted. Tolkien’s heroes are most exemplary, for him, when they fight in the face of despair, knowing they will do little or nothing for the cause of virtue. Thus, Gandalf’s famous line to Pippin: “There never was much hope…just a fool’s hope.[74]”

Lewis, too, believes that seeing and believing the narrative of Aslan is key in moral transformation.

In fact, one may describe The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe as a battle of narratives: that of the White Witch vs. that of Aslan. The same may be said of Til We Have Faces. Orual cannot become virtuous precisely because she cannot bring herself to believe – or acknowledge her belief – in the narrative of the gods, as does Psyche.

But there is something distinct about the way Lewis weaves this, for he is almost completely at odds with Tolkien. For Lewis, the path to virtue is to see the narrative, and acknowledges the great, weighty part one does have to play in it.

In perhaps the most telling passage on Lewis’s views, the Pevensie children are introduced to Aslan for the first time in the House of Mr. And Mrs. Beaver. Where this takes places is key, for it is smack in the center of the story, just where Lewis, as a literary artist, knows he can most effectively place his main point.

And what do we find there?

We find Lewis’s ideas about narrative and moral transformation. He beautifully – perhaps unlike any author before or after – is able to keep Aslan as the protagonist of his story, without sacrificing the central role of the children themselves. For Lewis, both God and we are the protagonists of the world’s story, an overwhelming thought but precisely the appeal of the Narnia books.

The way he puts it is like this, in the mouth of Mr. Beaver: “The quickest way you can help him is by going to meet Aslan…once he’s with us, then we can begin doing things. Not that we don’t need you too. For that’s another of the old rhymes: When Adam’s flesh and Adam’s bone Sits at Cair Paravel in throne, The evil time will be over and done.[75]”

This is a loaded passage for Lewis, since it contains all that is unique and enchanting about the Narnia series. There is here both great humility in the narrative’s dependence on Aslan. But there is also nearly incredible dignity in the weight the place of the children play in the story.

They are both central, even if the children are completely dependent on Aslan. In fact, they are not only the heroes of the story: they are here to take up the spoils of war, and become the rulers of Narnia itself.[76] It is they who will put the White Witch’s rule to rest.

We see also what it is to reject the narrative of Aslan when we reach The Last Battle. Once again, the book could be described as a battle of narratives. Like Tolkien, Lewis does not hold only two competing narratives against one another. Both Saruman and Gandalf believe the narrative, but they take it differently. The Riders of Rohan and the men of Gondor have rejected the narrative altogether. In the same way, The White Witch and Aslan hold competing narratives.

But there is a third option, just as dangerous: a rejection of the narrative altogether, as we see in the Last Battle. Lewis cleverly ties together the ideas of relativism – that “Tash and Aslan are one and the same”[77], with a rejection of the grounds of moral transformation.

We see this come to fruition in the character arch of Ginger the cat. She wants to know for certain that by this phrase Shift means that “Aslan means no more than Tash?”[78] For if that is true, says Ginger, what is truly being said is that no deity exists at all.[79] Much like the villains of the Space Trilogy, and Uncle Andrew himself, then, Ginger with great delight realizes that the narrative has been rejected. This makes room for a new narrative – one which serves those in power. And the perfect title for this narrative is “progress” and “enlightenment.[80]”

Ginger knows, as did Lewis, that this, in reality, is a justification of any single agenda those in power wish to play out. “Progress” is a gigantic fill-in-the-blank, and once people have bought in, any number of moral degenerations are possible.

Yet Lewis is also careful to hone in on the central weakness of this narrative: it is false. Or rather, the tale weaved is more true than Ginger would like it to be. For in the end, Ginger, along with others, have invited in deities they did not believe in. And this is, in the end, their very judgment.[81]

For Lewis and for Tolkien, narrative is absolutely central to virtue. Yet they differ in the way they approach our own role in the narrative.

For Lewis, virtue begins when we see and accept the weightiness of our role in the story. For Tolkien, virtue begins when we decide to play a small role in the grand narrative, rather than view ourselves as heroes.

Both men have their own strengths, here.

Tolkien prepares us well for the inevitable setbacks and failures of virtue. Things do not happen in our world as they do in Narnia. Yet Lewis helps us to keep before us what is truly going on under the surface. In the end, then, the difference is likely one of emphasis.

Tolkien emphasizes that in our experience true heroism rarely looks so. Lewis emphasizes the unseen world: though it may not look so on the surface, our role in the world’s redemption holds great and eternal weight.

For both of them, the key to societal transformation is held in the words of Frodo, when he arrives once again at the corrupted Shire: “For one thing, I see that you’re behind the times and the news here…The Dark Tower has fallen, and there is a King in Gondor.[82]” No passage better describes both author’s stance on the position of virtue in this world: it is bolstered, energized, and sanctioned by the truth of the narrative: the King has returned.

Evil is defeated. Anyone who believes otherwise is simply behind the times.

The Cultivation of Virtue and Vice: Gratitude Vs. Gluttony

If we were to ask Tolkien and Lewis of the nature of virtue, I believe both men would reply in harmony: virtue is a love for what is good.

This definition may seem simplistic enough, but it is far from secularized views passed off as virtue today. More properly, it is a theory of virtue, rather than a theory of ethics. Ethics may be done in ivory towers, much in the same way as Saruman. Virtue, however, begins in the heart. It is a beating desire for what is good, and a distaste for what is evil. In fact, “taste” is a central metaphor for virtue and vice in both Lewis and Tolkien, as we will see below.

In Tolkien, we see this in the way Gollum responds to the Elvish gifts, in many ways the embodiment of virtue (though certainly not of perfection)[83]. Sam describes the Elvish rope he’s received from Galadriel as “thin, but…tough; and soft as milk to the hand. Packs close too, and as light as light. Wonderful folk to be sure!”[84] Yet when the silver rope is placed upon Gollum’s neck, he protests: “It hurts us, it hurts us….It freezes, it bites! The Elves twisted it, curse them![85]” The same rope described as beautiful, elegant and durable by the Hobbits is worthy of cursing to the corrupt Gollum. The same is true of the elves’ lembas bread.[86] The same which gives health, life and strength to the Hobbits is “dust and ashes” to Gollum.

The point Tolkien is drawing from these – and other – encounters, is simply that goodness, virtue, and life are more akin to a taste than an analytic deduction of circumstances. To be virtuous, one must desire virtue, one must acquire a taste for it. And once you have delved deep down into misery, cold, pale fish will eventually be the only serviceable food. You have acquired a taste for death, rather than life.

On the other hand, Tolkien’s heroes are those who appreciate the goodness of life in and of itself. They are enjoyers of simple pleasures – beer, trees, good food, song and dance. This is a description of Hobbits, yes.

And no, Hobbits are not the embodiment of virtue per se.

However, Tolkien purposefully casts Saruman and Sauron as those who have no appreciation for these things. If Hobbits are not the embodiments of virtue, they are at least exemplary in this regard. When Sam returns to the Shire, it is the loss of these simple pleasures for which he mourns. When he sees all the trees of the Shire felled, it is “as though this was the last straw” and he bursts into tears.[87]

Treebeard’s description of Saruman’s corruption is perhaps most telling, here: “He is plotting to become a power. He has a mind of metal and wheels; and he does not care for growing things, except as far as they serve him for the moment.[88]”

Nothing could better describe Tolkien’s take on virtue and vice. Virtue is gratitude – Vice cannot be content with things as they are, but only loves them insofar as they are helps in domination. Evil sucks the world into itself, and shrinks it. Good looks about the world in wonder, and it expands and flourishes.

We see the same pattern in Lewis.

We see in Lewis that “taste” is very much a metaphor for moral transformation. We see this most clearly, perhaps, in the character of Eustace. Eustace, at the outset, has only a taste for facts, textbooks, and raw information.[89] Though the sea of Narnia is described as sweet and delightful to others, Eustace finds it makes him sick.[90] Reepicheep, who is of Narnia through and through, is the most distasteful character on the ship to Eustace.[91] However, after coming to the end of himself by taking on the dragon’s form, Eustace is able to see, for the first time, the King of Narnia: Aslan. Though Aslan commands Eustace to shed his own skin, time and again, he cannot.[92]

This is incredibly telling of Lewis.

Positive moral transformation was not normal. To “try” to become good is like “trying” to enjoy a food one dislikes. We can choose to act on our desires, but we cannot choose our desires themselves.

But for Lewis, the presence of Aslan in his stories makes this moral transformation possible. For in the end, it is Aslan who tears into Eustace’s skin, and commences his moral transformation.[93] It is then, and only then, that Eustace recognizes his hatred for Narnia was truly a distaste for Aslan himself.[94] Though Eustace has not experienced complete moral transformation, his tastes have changed: he has been taken off the path of darkness, and placed on the path of light; the path that leads to the source of light itself, Aslan’s country.[95]

For Lewis, then, moral transformation is not normal. It is supernatural. By submitting to Aslan’s surgery, each of us can be taken off the path which promises only to consume us.


Years ago when I first read The Voyage of the Dawn Treader, I could not understand the thematic relationship between Reepicheep’s search for Aslan’s country and the continuous perils of temptation.

But after understanding Lewis’ emphasis on the nature of virtue, I think for Lewis the themes were perfectly intact: the way to overcome vice is the pursuit of virtue. It is a desire for Aslan’s country which impels us toward the straight and narrow path here and now.

Indeed, Lewis makes the point himself in Mere Christianity: “If you read history you will find that the Christians who did most for the present world were just those who thought most of the next.[96]” For Lewis, the path to virtue was the pursuit of our chief and highest desire – heaven itself.

If we were to see any discrepancies between Lewis and Tolkien on this, it would be these.

First, Lewis holds moral transformation as a prominent and continuous motif. Tolkien does not. Again, this is probably somewhat true of the way each looked at the world, and characteristic of their own experience of Christianity. But it is also good to note that Tolkien looks characteristically “above the surface” in his writing: he is trying to present life as it is. Lewis is continually coming “under the surface” – showing what is going on from a heavenly perspective. So the pervasiveness of moral transformation, compared to Tolkien’s relative sparsity (only Theoden and Boromir show any signs of it), may be stylistic.

But they also shade differently on the question of how virtue is desired. For Tolkien, we desire what is good when we simply desire the good before us: good food, good homes, good friends, good music. When we cultivate a gratitude and taste for these, we are not tempted by lures of power.

But for Lewis, we must look beyond these things. The Reality to which they point is, in a very Platonistic sense, Aslan’s country, our true home. It is only by looking beyond what we have, to what all the good things symbolize, that we can truly appreciate them; and for Lewis, this was indeed the path to virtue.

Again, Tolkien may here have very well agreed. Certainly Lewis would affirm gratitude for the world here; certainly Tolkien would affirm hope for the next. We cannot be sure whether they would have agreed, however, on the relationship between the two. In any case, both men see evil as a cultivation of gluttony in the most Chestertonian sense, and gratitude as the seed of virtue.

The Strength for Virtue and Vice: Community vs. Bureaucracy

Finally we will examine Lewis and Tolkien’s third key in moral transformation. We have seen already that key to virtue is the embracing of the world’s true narrative, and a cultivation of hope-infused gratitude.

But by what means?

For both Lewis and Tolkien, one of the answers, at least, is community. But before we get to that, let’s examine first what Tolkien and Lewis saw as the enemy of true community: bureaucracy.

Why would this be so? It is because for Lewis and Tolkien, evil is essentially a form of self-deception, and that is the heart of bureaucracy.

Lewis explicitly comments on Edmund’s moral degeneration various times as a kind of self-deception:“but he managed to believe, or to pretend he believed, that she wouldn’t do anything very bad to them”[97]…even though he knows “deep down inside him…that the White Witch was bad and cruel”[98].

We see the same sentiment in Digory, when he is confronted about ringing the Witch’s bell. At first he claims he was under an enchantment, but at Aslan’s prompting admits: “No. I see now that I wasn’t.[99]”

In Gollum, Tolkien gives us a rather incisive view of the relationship between self-deception and evil. Gollum has been claiming, to this point, that the ring was given him as a gift. But in truth, Gollum knows what he did to acquire the ring: “The murder of Deagol haunted Gollum,” says Gandalf, “and he had made up a defense, repeating it to his ‘precious’ over and over again…until he almost believed it.[100]” It is the guilt and shame of evil which leads us to deceive ourselves about it. And it takes community to pull us away.

This is why Frodo insists on calling Gollum Smeagol – he will continue to present the truth before him, trying to coax him out of his self-deceit. He is bringing darkness into light.

What has this all to do with bureaucracy? It seems that for Lewis and Tolkien both, bureaucracy was dedicated entirely to the art of self-deception.

If community is about bringing darkness into light, bureaucracy’s agenda is just the opposite.

The goal of bureaucracy is to make darkness light; to remove us far from reality, to create a false world of our own. The goal is to cover up sin with political speech; to remove our eyes from the consequences of our actions by removal from the actual situation; to appeal to our desire for power through endless rings for insiders.

We see this most clearly in the Hobbits return to The Shire, in the final chapter of the Lord of the Rings trilogy.

The Shire is now in the charge of “The Chief”, and is not allowed to be called by his name, Lotho[101] Nor are the hobbits allowed to see him. The authorities discourage and ban any “excess” or enjoyment of things in themselves (see previous section), though it comes out that the authorities themselves are smuggling it all for their own pleasure[102]

“Plain talk” is discouraged, or “talking off-hand like”.[103] Politic speak is the only proper speech.

Those under Chief’s charge are both self-important and scared.[104] Everything is governed by a litany of rules and regulations.[105] Tolkien explicitly compares these authorities to orcs.[106] Here, industry is promoted above all, and this in the name of progress.[107] All the trees have been felled in the name of industry.[108]

In essence, what was once a natural community has now become a bureaucracy – and it has destroyed all that once was virtuous about the beloved Shire. It has made any appeals and opinions formed by the local community null and void, and placed all decision making power into the hands of those who don’t understand, or care for, the local situation: “He’ll do what Sharkey says. Because if a Boss gives trouble, we can change him. See? And if little folks try to push in where they’re not wanted, we can put them out of mischief. See?”[109]

The reason the political powers are against “plain talk” is that politic language is a manner of disguising the true cruelty of the institution.


We see an almost identical situation in The Voyage of the Dawn Treader. When Prince Caspian and crew arrive on the Lone Islands, they are told: “You can’t see his Sufficiency”[110]. The place has become a bureaucracy, where the guests are not welcome on grounds of not being in the minutes, but are welcome to make applications[111]. Against Prince Caspian’s plain assertion of power, the chief appeals to abstractions – graphs, statistics, economics, etc.[112].

The appeal to Caspian against his right to be king is all in the name of “progress” and “development” – more vague, political terms for using power against the weak[113]. One of Caspian’s first tasks is to make the Island free, saying, “I think we have had enough of governors”[114]

We see all of this in the Space Trilogy as well, even more explicitly, particularly in That Hideous Strength. Here, the evil powers distill mankind’s nature to simple chemical compounds – they have rejected the narrative[115].

The character Mark is compelled by his desire to be in the Inner Ring, something to which bureaucracy appeals (after all, “When had he ever done what he wanted?[116]”). This is unique in Lewis – for he not only sees the evil of bureaucracy, he also seems to quite understand its appeal. It is the carrot on a stick promise of belonging to the Innermost Ring, which one never seems to finally achieve: “…the passion for the Inner Ring is most skillful in making a man who is not yet a very bad man do very bad things”[117].

This, for Lewis, is where most of our modern evils occur: “The most evil things occur ‘in clean, carpeted, warmed, and well-lighted offices, by quiet men with white collars and cut fingernails and smooth-shaven cheeks who do not need to raise their voice.[118]”

This type of atmosphere allows all of the evil going on beneath to seem quite agreeable, even sophisticated to those on the inside.

This is also why, like the political powers of the Shire, “Plain Shire Talk” is forbidden in That Hideous Strength as well: “Making things clear is the one thing the DD can’t stand,” replied Miss Hardcastle. “That’s not how he runs the place. And mind you, he knows what he’s about.[119]”

On the contrary, we see the greatest good in the Lord of the Rings flowing from community, and the bonds of friendship.

Though Frodo’s intentions of bearing the ring alone are profound, his wisdom is surpassed by the simple intuition of Samwise.[120] Frodo rather quickly admits that he is glad at this, and that this was the good plan of Providence all along.[121] We will find later that the mission would indeed have failed without Sam, for he rescues Frodo from the Tower of Cirith Ungol.

In a telling moment, Gandalf, after having received the counsel of all the greatest minds in Middle Earth, states simply: “I think, Elrond, that it would be well to trust rather to their friendship than to great wisdom.[122]”

Indeed, the very title of the first book gives Tolkien away: “The Fellowship of the Ring.”

Community is also key in the moral transformation of Lewis’s Orual. We can see plainly from the outset of Lewis’s work that the chief malady of Orual is self-deception. She “sees” the palace of the gods, but claims later not to have seen.[123] The voice of truth speaks cleanly and clearly to here, even in her worst of moments: “She is ten times happier, there in the Mountain, than you could ever make her. Leave her alone.[124]” Later she will admit plainly that she had buried her guilt: “Memory, once waked, will play the tyrant.[125]”

Two things are instrumental in Orual’s awakening to her past guilt. The first is her own pen – her own self-reflection: “They used the pen to probe my wound.[126]”

It is imperative to see that before Orual uses her pen to this effect, she leaves the confines and bureaucracy of the palace, and heads out into the wild of the world. It is this which enables the gods to wield their second instrument in her: a community of commoners. No one in Orual’s kingdom would dare speak truth to her – that is not the design of a bureaucracy. The now eunuch Tarin tells her plainly of her cruelty to Redival.[127] It is the common looking Ansit, Bardia’s wife, who speaks truthfully to Orual about her cruelty to her husband.[128] It is by going out of her self-confining palace that she is first amazed by the joy of the people in their simple religious ceremonies.[129] In a penetrating line, Orual admits at the last: “The voice of the gods had not changed in all those years, but I had. There was no rebel in me now.[130]”

For Lewis, then, community – not bureaucracy – is the tool through which we are able to overcome self-deception. The path to corruption always begins and ends with separation from the community, as we see in both Edmund and Eustace (both of whom explicitly comment on their loss of community)[131].

If we are to travel the road of virtue, we must leave first the road of isolation.

This is an instance of almost conspiratorial similarity between Lewis and Tolkien. I had not been turned on to these themes in my last reading of them each, but side by side it becomes plain that they are sending a very pronounced message: if you would have moral transformation, don’t look to bureaucracy. Look to the simple joys and hardships of a community who will speak the truth in love, and unveil the darkness within.

Indeed, this is the very invitation of Tolkien’s Fellowship over and again. The hobbits will not even destroy Saruman, since the invitation to virtuous community is his only true hope of redemption.[132] In his own way, Tolkien is opening the door to us as well: will we leave the confines of our self-made palaces? Will we seek the truth about ourselves through the words of others? Will we leave the comfort of home, and take up the road to virtue?


This essay has been, for me, a journey indeed.

We have seen the way that Tolkien and Lewis characterize virtue and vice: they are the foundation of the sort of world we’re creating. They are not stagnant, but dynamic and synergistic realities. But they are not always plain: virtue and vice are often cloaked as the other. We have also seen some practical takeaways for taking the path toward positive moral transformation. We must first embrace the true narrative of the world. In light of this, we must cultivate an attitude of gratitude and wonder for the world itself. In order to do this, we must become part of a restorative community.

Certainly there are many areas in Lewis and Tolkien where I find inconsistencies, and disagreements.

But on the issue of moral transformation, it is difficult for me to see chinks in their armor: these men were masters and philosophers of virtue, and it shines through in their writing.

In fact, the more I’ve traveled this road, the more I’ve become convinced that moral transformation is, in its own way, the very heartbeat of Tolkien and Lewis. They are almost too consistent, and too harmonious, for it to be otherwise.

Perhaps this essay may further the conversation on what it is they wished to say. It certainly has encouraged me onward toward that road. But perhaps I could not articulate myself better than Mr. Bilbo himself, in what I believe to be the entire theme of Tolkien’s work:

The Road goes ever on and on
Down from the door where it began.
Now far ahead the Road has gone,
And I must follow, if I can,
Pursuing it with eager feet,
Until it joins some larger way
Where many paths and errands meet.
And wither then? I cannot say.

[1] Return of the King, pg. 366
[2] Ibid, pg. 344
[3] Ibid. pg. 367
[4] Ibid, pg. 360
[5] The Chronicles of Narnia, Kindle location 10418
[6] Ibid, location 10422
[7] Ibid, location 460
[8] Ibid, location 591
[9] Ibid, 1562
[10] Ibid, 1582
[11] Romans 6:21
[12] Dr. Ryan Reeves, “Tolkien Themes: Part 2”.
[13] The Two Towers, pg. 354
[14] Fellowship of the Ring, pg. 448
[15] Fellowship, pg. 454
[16] The Two Towers, pg. 18
[17] Ibid, pg. 18
[18] Till We Have Faces, pg. 75
[19] Ibid, location 16711
[20] The Space Trilogy, location 6759
[21] Ibid. pg. 7286
[22] Ibid. Location 8294
[23] Ibid. Location 8447
[24] The Two Towers, pg. 285
[25] Ibid. pg. 375-377
[26] Ibid. pg. 60
[27] Dr. Reeves, “Themes in Tolkien Part 1”
[28] The Two Towers, pg. 303-305
[29] Fellowship of the Ring, pg. 60
[30] Ibid. pg. 61
[31] Lewis, C.S., “The Weight of Glory”, pg. 45
[32] Fellowship of the Ring, pg. 53
[33] Ibid, pg. 150
[34] Ibid, pg. 196
[35] Ibid, pg. 223
[36] Ibid, pg. 312
[37] Ibid, pg. 178
[38] Ibid, pg. 193
[39] Ibid, pg. 193
[40] Ibid, pg. 194, pg. 442
[41] Ibid, pg. 384
[42] Ibid, pg. 439
[43] Ibid, pg. 239
[44] Ibid, pg. 309
[45] Ibid, pg. 446-447
[46] Ibid, pg. 449
[47] The Two Towers, pg. 234
[48] Ibid, pg. 125
[49] Dr. Reeves, Lecture 10: Themes in Lord of the Rings
[50] The Two Towers, pg. 219
[51] Ibid pg. 232
[52] The Chronicles of Narnia, location 16875
[53] Ibid, page 16998
[54] Ibid, location 17006
[55] Ibid, location 17096
[56] Ibid, location 508
[57] Ibid, location 9052
[58] Ibid, location 9719
[59] Ibid, location 10075
[60] Ibid, location 10415
[61] Ibid, location 10518
[62] Dr. Reeves, Themes in Narnia
[63] Ibid, location 3494
[64] Ibid, location 10422
[65] The Two Towers, pg. 363
[66] Ibid, pg. 160
[67] Ibid, pg. 149
[68] Ibid, pg. 45
[69] Dr. Reeves, Themes in Lord of the Rings
[70] The Two Towers, pg. 407-408
[71] Ibid, pg. 408
[72] Ibid, pg. 367
[73] The Return of the King, pg. 43
[74] Ibid, pg. 100
[75] The Chronicles of Narnia, 1156
[76] Ibid, location 1182
[77] Ibid, location 17354
[78] Ibid, location 17368
[79] Ibid, location 18036
[80] Ibid 18040
[81] Ibid, location 18474
[82] The Return of the King, pg. 351
[83] Dr. Reeves, Themes in LOTR, Lecture 1
[84] The Two Towers pg. 273
[85] Ibid, pg. 284
[86] Ibid, pg. 290
[87] Return of the King, pg. 366
[88] The Two Towers, pg. 96
[89] The Chronicles of Narnia, location 4851
[90] Ibid location 5170
[91] Ibid, location 5788
[92] Ibid, location 6242
[93] Ibid, location 6242
[94] Ibid, location 6273
[95] Ibid, location 6297
[96] Mere Christianity, pg. 134
[97] The Chronicles of Narnia, location 1281
[98] Ibid, location 1284
[99] Location 16158
[100] The Fellowship of the Ring, pg. 62
[101] Return of the King, pg. 343
[102] Ibid, pg. 344
[103] Ibid, pg. 344
[104] Ibid, pg. 347
[105] Ibid, pg. 347
[106] Ibid, pg. 350
[107] Ibid, pg. 361
[108] Ibid, pg. 366
[109] Ibid, pg. 351
[110] The Chronicles of Narnia, location 5524
[111] Ibid, location 5559
[112] Ibid, location 5595
[113] Ibid, location 5595
[114] Ibid, location 5569
[115] The Space Trilogy, location 11621
[116] Ibid, location 13313
[117] The Weight of Glory, pg. 154
[118] The Screwtape Letters, Preface
[119] The Space Trilogy, location 7810
[120] The Fellowship of the Ring, pg. 457
[121] Ibid, pg. 457
[122] Ibid, pg. 310
[123] Till We Have Faces, pg. 133
[124] Ibid, pg. 138
[125] Ibid, pg. 253
[126] Ibid, pg. 254
[127] Ibid, pg. 256
[128] Ibid, pg. 259
[129] Ibid, pg. 272-273
[130] Ibid, pg. 280
[131] The Chronicles of Narnia, location 5842, and 1562
[132] Return of the King, pg. 369

Scribblepreach Awards 09.03.16

Kindle Deal of the Week: Finishing Our Course With Joy – J.I. Packer’s insights on finishing the Christian life well, for $3.99

Apologetics: The Doctrine of the Knowledge of God: “If God is ‘wholly other’, then how can we know or say that He is ‘wholly other’? What right do we have to do theology at all if that is the case? And if God is indistinguishable from the world, why should the theologian even bother to speak of God? Why not simply speak of the world? Is it faith that validates such talk? Faith based on what? Can such faith be more than an irrational leap in the dark?”

Preaching: From My Journal: (this one is unfiltered, so be warned…) I’ve stopped preaching like Tim Keller. Not because I don’t like him. Not because he isn’t good, but because now I’m in the south. Tim Keller’s preaching – *gasp* – isn’t relevant here (I think he would agree, actually). I’ve had way too many pats on the back when I address atheism…which tells me I’m preaching to the wrong crowd. No one is getting offended. I’m realizing why, now: atheists, here, are like Big Foot. We’ve only seen pictures of them in the newspaper. So when I argue with atheists, I get a lot of “Yeah go GET those damned atheists!” which is not at all what I’m trying to do, here.

Before, I needed to address Christian skeptics. Now my apologetic is aimed at “Christians”, who don’t understand the nature of the gospel. The idols here are not couched in atheistic secularism. They are consumer Christianity, Christian relativism, Christian individualism, and Christian gnosticism. More on this soon.

Theology: The Life of J. Alec Motyer – I found myself inspired and warmed by this all week, especially as I enjoy the fruit of his work on Exodus.

Spiritual Life – 8 Ways to Overcome Perfectionism. Wow. This is one of the best articles I’ve read on WRITING (even though it’s not about that, really). This kind of thing hits me square between the eyes, in a motivating/encouraging way.

Fun: 3 Stories by Gene Wilder – Gene Wilder (Willy Wonka, Dr. Frankenstein in Young Frankenstein), who passed away this week, tells a couple of funny and charming stories about his acting career.

A Glimpse of Truth: What Makes You So Sure? – The New Yorker has a nice, accessible roundup on the history of philosophy (albeit unbeknownst to the author, it seems, it is all framed by the enlightenment). But I appreciated it for its honest conclusion: philosophy has really only left the biggest questions about life wide open.

Writing: 128 Ways to Avoid the Word “Very”Very awesome infographic on this.

Books and Lit: Ursula K. Le Guin’s Angry Acceptance Speech – Please let me be like her when I grow up.

Christians and Culture: Mike Birbiglia’s 6 Tips for Making it (Small) in Hollywood – This is the best piece I’ve read on Christians engaging culture, and it’s not written by a Christian. Again, more on this soon.

Leadership and Productivity: 20 Quick Tips to Improve Your Productivity. YES. Love when Tim Challies writes on this topic. He’s the best out there.

Scribblepreach Awards 08.27.16

Kindle Deal of the Week: Michael F. Bird’s “Romans” – A brilliant commentary by a brilliant theologian on a brilliant book. Don’t miss it, for $7.99

Apologetics: 3 Ways the Blind Man and the Elephant Story Backfires – Love the way Trevin quotes from a wide variety of sources to make his points.

Preaching: Preachers, Don’t Trust Yourself – Thabiti Anyabwile with some words of wisdom, here.

Spiritual Life: Why You Need a Church (Not Just a Campus Ministry) – I think my life will soon be dedicated to this article.

Theology: The Doctrine of the Knowledge of God – “Theology is not needed to remedy formal or material defects in Scripture but to remedy defects in ourselves, the hearers and readers of scripture.”

What Frame is saying here is that theology does not, as Charles Hodge has suggested, put the Bible in its “proper order” (systematics), as though the Bible’s own order were in some way improper. Nor is theology a way to dismiss the “material” facts and claims of scripture with mere expression of religious feelings. Moving on:

“Theology in this sense (as opposed to theology in other senses) has a clear scriptural warrant: Scripture commands us to “teach” in this way (Matt. 28:19 and many other passages). Despite its focus on human need, this definition does full justice to the authority and sufficiency of Scripture. Sola Scriptura (scripture alone) does not require that human needs be ignored in theology, only that Scripture have the final say about the answers to those needs.”

In other words: theology is simply communicating the truth of the Bible in a way that meets human needs and answers human questions (provided the questions are justified by scripture!)

Fun: 14 Justifiably Forgotten Milton Bradley Games – Such classics as “Let’s be Safe”, “Bigfoot”, and “Do the Urkel!”

A Glimpse of Truth: Ark Encounter and Biblical Literalism – There’s something to affirm and deny in this article on Ken Ham’s newest project, from a secular perspective.

Writing: That vs. Which is – I’ve never understood this, which is really sad. That is, it’s sad which I never understood it.

Books and Lit: Neil Gaiman Reads for Ray Bradbury – I didn’t realize Neil Gaiman had such a great voice. This is a short, funny, clever, 13-minute story Gaiman wrote for Ray Bradbury, about the power of words and stories.

Christians and Culture: What Became of Christian Intellectuals? Alan Jacobs with a rather long, but I think rather important article. Very eye-opening (now that I write that, I realize Satan first crafted that metaphor…maybe I should put it away!)

Leadership and Productivity: How to Speak to Our Culture About Sex – DeYoung, Moore and Keller with lots of honed (but I think admittedly differing) wisdom on this.